Lab Assignment: Text for Editing Practice (see posts below)

Please look at the selected paragraphs in the post below regarding text editing.

Please copy and paste all the text into your own blog post and work to edit and correct the paragraphs.  Edit for the following:

• grammar
• "boring" or unsophisticated vocabulary
• fragments or run-ons
• adding better transitions and organizational phrases

Your own blog post can be titled: Text Editing Practice